Out of all of the literacy narratives I read in English class, Brooke Dillon's was the best. Her heart-braking story of her and her grandmother's relationship was vividly written. I felt like I was there. It was clear that reading and writing were significant in her paper. Them two emailing back in forth was a key aspect (which is writing and reading). My favorite part was when her grandma asked her how many toilet paper rolls she used because she was concerned that they might run out. It really makes me sad that they are not closer. I can relate because my grandma died before I was two. I wish I could have met her.
My second favorite paper was Mary Beth William's. It was so funny. She talks about her experience on being the only freshmen in her journalism class. She doesn't know any of the upper-classmen, but finds them to be quite the characters. My favorite part was when she made up nicknames for some of the student's that stood out the most. The first being: "the hulk."She described him as tall, masculine, and scary. I found it so funny because it only took me one guess to figure out who she was talking about. The second being: "country boy." He had a thick southern accent, and wasn't the smartest. Turns out, he dropped the class and was never seen again.
Hey Katherine Ann,
ReplyDeleteThat is very generous that you took your time to write and reflect on my narrative. I agree it is indeed difficult when you can't connect with someone you love. Do you have grandmothers you are close with now? I am very sorry for the early death of your grandmother. I feel your pain. I agree that Mary-Beth's narrative was humorous. I had great descriptions of the characters. Also, your narrative was very upsetting yet understandable. I know that you used to struggle with anxiety and home sick issues. I am here for you if you need. I am also very proud of you for conquering your fears and happy you had a great camp experience.
Your Friend,
Brooke Dillon