You have two poetry-related posts
for this week. You should spend about 15 focused minutes on the actual
writing of each (as always). If you spend time preparing to
write these posts (for instance, annotating song lyrics), you can count it
toward your 120 minutes. Also, remember you need a book to read. If
you've been reading something random from my shelf in class, you are going to
need a book to get to 120 minutes. Go to the library or do what you need
to do.
In this phrase, in "Umbrella"
by Rihanna feat. Jay-Z, "Let it rain, I hydroplane in the bank
Coming down with the Dow Jones
When the clouds come we gone, we Rocafella
We fly higher than weather
In anticipation, for precipitation," is an
example of assonance.
In this part of the song, "You have my heart
And we'll never be worlds apart
Maybe in magazines
But you'll still be my star
Baby 'cause in the dark
You can't see shiny cars
And that's when you need me there
With you I'll always share," euphony, cacophony,
and assonance are displayed. In this song
umbrella is a symbol of shelter and protection. The
purpose of this song is to tell a spouse or loved one that when bad
things happen Rihanna will always be there for that special person.
In addition, she is trying to convey that everything will be ok because she
will be there for that person, but when good things happen they can have fun
together and embrace the good times. The word: "umbrella" in
this song is an example of an anaphora.
The tone in this song is
disapproval of this person's actions but she also assures this person that she
will always be there for them no matter what mistakes they make. Rihanna's
diction sounds like she is trying to be informative and convince this person of
her feelings for them. The speaker is a girlfriend or a wife.
The purpose of this song is for a
spouse or loved one.
Post 2:
Write a Poem
Write a poem! In no less than
15 lines, use a minimum of 3 of the techniques we've been discussing, and
identify the techniques at the end.
Your poem can be about anything,
but if you need ideas:
- describe an object or place that
means something to you with dense imagery
- narrate a memory from childhood
(you can use the free-writing we did in class)
- use figurative language to
describe an emotion
- a letter to someone or something
- a list
Post your
reading details - be specific.
Dear Dad,
I am
coming home soon.
I love my
counselor Waldo.
We went
with Waldo while we were watching for wolves.
Dudes
were frightened gazing through the forest.
Sally
said she was scared seven times.
At night,
I sleep well and fall asleep easily.
In the
morning, I wake abruptly when the bell rings loudly over the speaker
next to
our cabin. I dress with no stress.
I feel
very blessed. Summer is coming to an end,
hopefully
I will return to camp again.
I assume
home is calm and peaceful.
Is the
weatherman still deceitful?
It is
warm here and sunny everyday,
wondering
if you are having a great day.
Love
forever and always,
Hayes
I used
sibilance, euphony, cacophony, consonance, assonance, and enjambment.